Parkour Slime Parkour

[Senzii]

Hi !
Presenting my new parkour Slime Parkour

Name: Slime Parkour
Difficulty: Medium (not hard not difficult)
Length: Depending on what path you choose, but in general, Long
Checkpoints: Depending on what path you choose, but in all of the map there are 10 checkpoints

-My friend and I did the parkour on a solo world, so if iiJam is interest i'll put on MediaFire

-There is not all of the screens. I've put the most important.

-Builders: Senzii, Wijy

-Give your opinions/things to add below

 

[EPICMATT88]

I think it's a good idea, idk if I would have done the same textures but all in all it looks decent.

 

[Trenly]

I don't like it. In a way it seems very similar to green parkour, but nowhere near as nice.

 

[ImTea]

Chill with the green, then it might be decent. The park our itself seems decent. Just, too much green. Change it up a bit and you may have yourself a nice looking map.

 

[Porky]

I like it in my opinion.

 

[Senzii]

Chill with the green, then it might be decent. The park our itself seems decent. Just, too much green. Change it up a bit and you may have yourself a nice looking map.

Thx for feedback, thinking about changing the colour

 

[juicylies]

I dun like it..

 

[Kristian]

I totally agree with T3A, it's too much green. It would look much better if you put other colours as well. But after all, I like the map to be honest heh.

 

[iiJam]

I do agree that there is a lot of green. Try adding new textures. And there isn't a whole lot going on other then green wool walls, roofs, floors and then the jumps. But it looks promising. Please PM me a download link and I'll try and review it asap. I'm having computer problems atm.
Thanks!

 

[NoHaxJustJambo]

I Think its really cool!

 

[iiJam]

First off, I'm really for taking so long for a reply.
The map seems mediocre in my opinion. Not horrible but not the best.
The terraforming at the start isn't overly great but it'll do. Same goes with the slime.
But once you enter there is just an eye sore of green everywhere. I'd suggest going with a different block that complements green for the walls, roof and floor. I reckon some sort of think dark oak planks design could be cool with the floor and roof, with something complementing the green for the walls. You'd have to play around with what works - assuming you decide to revamp the map - Then i feel like the jumps would stand out a lot more but not look out of place - if you use the right blocks.
There are a few unnecessary slime blocks and jumps. The rooms with the lava are just a real hassle and time consuming, then actual parkour. And the checkpoint signs for the wrong paths wouldn't work. Unless you're a mockingjay+ and could teleport to each checkpoint, if you set your checkpoint on a wrong path, you'd have to start over. You have a checkpoint set right before it slips up into three options, so why even use the fake checkpoints?
This map is a bit of a mash of Fancy, and a dungeon parkour in my opinion.
The parkour itself seems decent, but it's the lack of details and things I noted here that unfortunately give me my decision.
Sorry
Your map has been declined

 

[youngfloppa]

I think slime Parkour a good idea, however, it is a hard job making a good looking Parkour with
(In my opinion) such an ugly block. Slime blocks go well with few things such as; cobblestone, wall, stairs etc. In fact most of the stone. If you want it to be green try making it with clay not wool because wools texture just looks ugly. Don't use too much of the green too try to get a good balance of colours and textures. So mainly try not to use much green otherwise it won't look good and the player will not see the slime XD.

I'm not being mean I'm just giving some advice overall it looks a good effort. Well done